Now that I've sent this off to a couple of contests, I've put the final draft of The Last Anniversary on my website here. Now I have no excuse but to buckle down on that one-man show...
I do think it more poignant without the "surprise." Although - I am not against surprises in a ten-minute. But the tone of the piece is sweeter and more truthful - because this is life and death and "it" would be brought up. Crossing my fingers for you.